Thread:ChaoticCrush/@comment-24142930-20131209120935

Hi Chaotic,

I've been using your method on how to structure opening paragraphs from the post you left on my blog post last week. The way you suggested to end the paragraph was "Jelly fish will be activated during Sugar Crush and score you more points". However I've only realised recently, on the blog you made, you've ended the paragraph as "When you have extra moves left in this level, Jelly Fish will help you eat candies and give you extra points" and you have been using this way for the edits you've made.

What sounds a better last sentence? I've edited the first 30 levels so far, so it's important we decide early on the best way to close the paragraph so the edits can be made!

I'm open to other suggestions as well. Perhaps. "When you have extra moves left in this level, Sugar Crush will activate Jelly Fish to eat candies and score you additional points"? 