Thread:Cheekian/@comment-17897872-20190823005736/@comment-17897872-20190827045808

Yay, I got closer this time! :D

I’ll keep these in mind if there are still things that need to be done in my time zone:
 * Windows 10 App redesigns (most recent three episodes) do not need to have redesigned templates.
 * Use “fewer” instead of “less.”
 * Use the phrase “There were [] instead of []” when needed.
 * Of course, double check to make sure all info is correct and that I haven’t missed anything. I noticed sometimes I overlook changes.

Was there anything else I could do to improve?

Oh, |as a note, it is grammatically to say that “Liquorice locks were not present” or “No liquorice locks were present”. Unfortunately, saying “No liquorice locks presented...” is not correct grammatically. Not a big deal, but maybe it’s something to keep in mind if the phrase comes up a lot :).

Hopefully when new episodes come out, I can start helping to do redesigns while you do unreleased versions/current level info. :) It’s hard work but it feels rewarding!