User blog comment:RoIento/Structure of opening paragraph for levels articles/@comment-12720959-20131204014608

Personally I think it should go more like this:

Example: Level 122 is the twelfth level in Peppermint Palace, the one-hundred and second level overall and the thirteenth moves level. To pass this level, you must score at least 40,000 points in 35 moves or less. Sugar Crush will activate all special candies when there are no more moves left.

I say this because it's good to keep things organized. I feel it's redundant to say "is the  xxxxx level in candy crush saga" as we all know it's this game. That's why I replace it with "overall."

Another example: Level 382 is the second level in Licorice Tower, the three hundred and second level overall and the one hundred and sixty-second jelly level. To pass this level, you must clear 21 jelly squares and score at least 45,000 points in 40 moves or less. Jelly fish will be activated during Sugar Crush and score you more points.

Same thing really just different level type. I do it this way because it gets out all the "level" information at the beginning instead of jumping from saying "level xx is the blank in episode blank. to pass this level etc. it is the blank level of candy crush etc."

This keeps it organized and also, it flows. "...sixty-second jelly level. To pass this level you must clear 21 jelly squares and etc..."

This way, people know it is a jelly level by finishing the first sentence but without choppy sentences like, "It is a jelly level."

I try to always do it this way when I edit pages because I feel it looks the nicest and sums up the general information quickly and neatly. I think the way you proposed is too choppy and some of it is unnecessary.

I am glad you brought this up, though, it's been driving me crazy seeing these different levels with different intro formats! Thanks for bringing this to everyone's attention!!